Hey!
I really enjoyed this!
I think if you could get some real drums this would sound amazing, but I know it's a lot easier said than done.
I really like the chorus section and the clean section is a refreshing change. I personally would have loved to hear a solo after the clean section, but thats just my opinion.
I think you're doing a great job and hope to hear more!

P.S.
I would love to have just the guitar track to jam to..I think you could make a lot of tracks just guitar for people to play drums to, I look every week for new material to play to.

Good job!

I think you did a really good job on this!
The only thing I would have liked to hear was some kind of fill or something to go into new sections.
I really liked the beat, I haven't heard too many songs with a beat like this.
If you keep making this kind of stuff I think you'll do pretty good...
Good job